CGMythology's Sketchbook
Nice piece on the whole! Lots of elements I like here like how you tackled  her skin tone and tail and I think the water splashes work quite well and sell the effect. I think if I had to pick a few areas I would tweak would be now that you added the rain it feels like her hair should sit heavier and bit more clumped. Kind of similar to the silhouette in this process pic you had in your process gif which looks great 



Also I still feel the scale of the ship is still a little off as I kind of looks like the pirate is at the front of a small row boat and the larger ship is more in the distance behind him which could have been a cool effect if decided to go that way as if he was taking a small boat ashore to see the babe. 

but great work and you are a credit to how open you are to feedback and how you respond to everyone’s suggestions is admirable. Kudos to you dude keep up the great work and even better attitude.

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